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下列表格为某市1996年与2006年人们度假方式的情况比较，请按表格内容写一篇150词左右的短文，并对度假方式变化原因加以简要评析。

The way people spend their holidays changed a lot from 1996 to 2006.             

[思路点拨]

１．  题材：书信；  说明+议论      

２．  时态：一般现在时

３．  人称：第三人称

４．  要点提示：（１）上网的目的；（２）读新闻；　（３）发送邮件；（４）聊天；（５）学习；（６）玩游戏；（７）评语

５．  篇章结构：文章可分两段

［文采修饰］

１．  连接词的选用：but, both…, and, moreover, otherwise

２．  高级词汇的选用：keep in touch with, as for…, use… as …, benefit from, pay attention to, altogether, in one’s opinion.

３．  复杂句型的选用：what…most 引导的主语从句；as 引导的让步状语从句；倒装语序等。

范文：

Dear editor,

I have recently made a survey among 30 boys and 30 girls in my class about their purpose of getting on the Internet.

The girls’ favorite is chatting, but few boys like it. What the boys like to do most is playing games and the girls also like it. Both boys and girls like to read news or send e-mails on the Internet. Maybe they think it’s the most convenient way to get information from keeping in touch with friends. As for studying, the numbers of boys and girls are equal, but altogether only several of them will use the Internet as a tool to study.

In my opinion, useful as the Internet is, the students had better make better and wise use of it. Otherwise, it’s impossible for us to benefit from it. Moreover, I also hope the parents will pay enough attention to their children using the Internet in their spare time.

                                                                Yours，

                                                                Li Hua

思路点拨：

1、体裁：比较对照类

2、时态：一般过去时（发表评论时可用一般现在时）

3、人称：第三人称

4、篇章结构：分三段      

范文：

The way people spend their holidays changed a lot from 1996 to 2006.